I think I did really well on my non-narrative piece! I really enjoyed doing this piece and this is my overall favorite piece! I expressed my opinion that Taylor Swift is an amazing song writer and she stays true to herself. I think this because she isn’t like a lot of other song writers she didn’t go out and get tattoos or doesn’t use bad words in her songs. I think that this is the best writing piece I’ve ever done in my life! I think that it had a lot of good details! I am very proud to say that that’s my piece! I organized my piece very well. I also found a lot of information about Taylor Swift while I was doing my research! It was really fun to learn new things about Taylor Swift that I didn’t know about before. I think that I had a lot of personal connections with this piece. I thought my topic sentences were very clear. I think I really expressed my feelings in this piece. I’ve learned how to make my story better and how I could stretch my sentences out and use sentence variety. This story took me a while to do but trust me it was worth the time! I’ve really learned the past year how to make my writing piece strong and better. I am so happy that Mrs.Bubalis taught me things about writing that I never knew before!
Taylor Swift is amazingly famous! She is an amazing song writer! She always stays true to herself. Taylor never gives up on her dreams. In my opinion I think she is brave and amazing! I think she is brave because she has to perform in front of a lot of people. She is my idol and probably a lot of other girls’ too!
Taylor had an amazing early life! Taylor was born on December 13, 1989.Her full name is Taylor Alison Swift. Her brother’s name is Austin! He is two years younger than her, he also is a goalie in lacrosse! She grew up on a Christmas tree farm! She learned to play the guitar when she was twelve. She started performing when she was ten! She won a national poetry contest when she was in fourth grade.At fourteen, she became the youngest staff songwriter ever hired by Sony Tree publishing house in Nashville.
Taylor has a lot of favorite things. Taylor loves the color white! She loves cheesecake. Her favorite number is thirteen. Her favorite holiday is Christmas. Taylor’s much loved season is summer. Her favorite memory is living on a farm. Taylor’s favorite thing to do is to drive fast!
Taylor has done a lot of song writing. She began to write songs when she was twelve. She has written/co written over two-hundred songs. All of her songs from speak now she wrote by herself. The song “Fifteen” she wrote about her friend Abigail. She also tends to use real names in her songs.
Taylor loves and likes a lot of things. She loves little kids! She also likes black and white pictures. She likes to read up on weird medical problems! Taylor loves when things are organized. She loves to wear a sundress with cowboy boots. She also loves to wear bracelets.
Taylor is very pretty and lucky! Taylor’s hair is blond and curly. She has blue eyes! She has her own line for makeup its called cover girl! Taylor never really wears her hair straight! Taylor was the first celebrity to appear on the cover of Justine magazine!
Taylor connects with her fans. Taylor can connect with her fans by MySpace, Facebook, Instagram, and twitter! Taylor has over seven million followers on twitter! She has a lot of beautiful pictures of her on Instagram too!
Taylor has good music videos! Her music videos are amazing and there and not inappropriate. They are sometimes soothing and about a real story! You can go on YouTube and look up Taylor Swift music videos. Right when you see them you will fall in love with them!
Many girls have opinions about her. Alyssa’s opinion of
Taylor Swift is “She’s a great singer and she speaks the truth.” She thinks that because when she was at her concert she talked about her child hood, and she wrote songs about her life! Christine’s says her opinion about Taylor is that “She writes good songs, because they’re country and pop at the same time and I like country and pop!”
I’ve learned that Taylor Swift is an amazing song writer and singer! I really hope she will stay herself and never changes. A lot of girls say she is a good role model, and I agree with them! I’ve also learned that she is a very lucky girl because she has so many fans to support her!
Gillian Rock
I think I did really well on my non-narrative piece! I really enjoyed doing this piece and this is my overall favorite piece! I expressed my opinion that Taylor Swift is an amazing song writer and she stays true to herself. I think this because she isn’t like a lot of other song writers she didn’t go out and get tattoos or doesn’t use bad words in her songs. I think that this is the best writing piece I’ve ever done in my life! I think that it had a lot of good details!
I am very proud to say that that’s my piece! I organized my piece very well. I also found a lot of information about Taylor Swift while I was doing my research! It was really fun to learn new things about Taylor Swift that I didn’t know about before. I think that I had a lot of personal connections with this piece. I thought my topic sentences were very clear.
I think I really expressed my feelings in this piece. I’ve learned how to make my story better and how I could stretch my sentences out and use sentence variety. This story took me a while to do but trust me it was worth the time! I’ve really learned the past year how to make my writing piece strong and better. I am so happy that Mrs.Bubalis taught me things about writing that I never knew before!
Taylor Swift is amazingly famous! She is an amazing song writer! She always stays true to herself. Taylor never gives up on her dreams. In my opinion I think she is brave and amazing! I think she is brave because she has to perform in front of a lot of people. She is my idol and probably a lot of other girls’ too!
Taylor had an amazing early life! Taylor was born on December 13, 1989.Her full name is Taylor Alison Swift. Her brother’s name is Austin! He is two years younger than her, he also is a goalie in lacrosse! She grew up on a Christmas tree farm! She learned to play the guitar when she was twelve. She started performing when she was ten! She won a national poetry contest when she was in fourth grade. At fourteen, she became the youngest staff songwriter ever hired by Sony Tree publishing house in Nashville.
Taylor has a lot of favorite things. Taylor loves the color white! She loves cheesecake. Her favorite number is thirteen. Her favorite holiday is Christmas. Taylor’s much loved season is summer. Her favorite memory is living on a farm. Taylor’s favorite thing to do is to drive fast!
Taylor has done a lot of song writing. She began to write songs when she was twelve. She has written/co written over two-hundred songs. All of her songs from speak now she wrote by herself. The song “Fifteen” she wrote about her friend Abigail. She also tends to use real names in her songs.
Taylor loves and likes a lot of things. She loves little kids! She also likes black and white pictures. She likes to read up on weird medical problems! Taylor loves when things are organized. She loves to wear a sundress with cowboy boots. She also loves to wear bracelets.
Taylor is very pretty and lucky! Taylor’s hair is blond and curly. She has blue eyes! She has her own line for makeup its called cover girl! Taylor never really wears her hair straight! Taylor was the first celebrity to appear on the cover of Justine magazine!
Taylor connects with her fans. Taylor can connect with her fans by MySpace, Facebook, Instagram, and twitter! Taylor has over seven million followers on twitter! She has a lot of beautiful pictures of her on Instagram too!
Taylor has good music videos! Her music videos are amazing and there and not inappropriate. They are sometimes soothing and about a real story! You can go on YouTube and look up Taylor Swift music videos. Right when you see them you will fall in love with them!
Many girls have opinions about her. Alyssa’s opinion of
Taylor Swift is “She’s a great singer and she speaks the truth.” She thinks that because when she was at her concert she talked about her child hood, and she wrote songs about her life! Christine’s says her opinion about Taylor is that “She writes good songs, because they’re country and pop at the same time and I like country and pop!”
I’ve learned that Taylor Swift is an amazing song writer and singer! I really hope she will stay herself and never changes. A lot of girls say she is a good role model, and I agree with them! I’ve also learned that she is a very lucky girl because she has so many fans to support her!
Gillian Rock
6-Mannon
January 19, 2012
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